Oh, what a sad story! Poor Jeeves! Having feelings for Bertie and his master is drunk every night. God, every night! Poor Bertie. This is extremely well done, you do a great Jeeves POV. The beginning is particularly good to me, entering Jeeves's mind through the clothing he handles.
There's a few typos, the most glaring one being "hot soap and cold soap".
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Date: 2020-06-17 06:25 pm (UTC)There's a few typos, the most glaring one being "hot soap and cold soap".
ETA: There's a prompt on the give_satisfaction Kinkiness thread that's close to what you've written. You can leave a link and a summary, or post the whole fic, at the link.
https://give-satisfaction.dreamwidth.org/2406.html?thread=590950#cmt590950